修正前
It was 2 days, being have still tired and have a little job after tent hike, rearrange of my baggage, making a movie, etc. My backpack is little bit smaller to keep gear inside it. But I cannot stand any more because of a pain, weist and shoulder that hit my belt or backle, weist pad. Gregory 45 L zakk is something cheep structure compare to Norceface one ( 35L is not enough I think). This summer season, I went to solo tent hike 3 times. It was still warm I could have not carrying less of equipment. but it must be more thing is needed, when it comes to more cool temperature. To pack more smaller, sponges to wipe water that attacheed surface of tent to put it inside compress bag. It will be more heavier after using tent. In summer season, more cloths is needed because of change, that cloths come to wet because of sweat, so it become more heavy. Decrease stress, preassure of backpack is most problem that I faced in this time event.
2日経ちましたが、まだ疲れが残っていて、テント泊の後、荷物の整理や、映画の撮影など、ちょっとした仕事がありました。バックパックは、荷物を入れるには少し小さかった。しかし、ベルトやバックル、ウェストパッドに当たる腰や肩の痛みで、もうこれ以上の重さには堪えられない。グレゴリーの45Lザックは、ノースフェイスのザック（35Lでは足りないと思います）と比べると、かなりチープな構造です。この夏、3回ほどソロでテント泊の山行に出かけました。でも、もっと涼しくなると、もっと必要なものがあるはずです。テントをもっと小さくまとめて圧縮袋の中に入れるには、テントの表面に付着した水分を拭き取るスポンジを携帯しておく。テントは使用後に水分でさらに重くなります。夏場は服が汗で濡れ、より多くの服が必要になるので、さらに重くなります。バックパックのストレスと圧迫感の軽減が、今回のイベントで一番気になったところです。
修正後
It's been two days and I'm still tired, and after a night in a tent, I had to do a little work, like organizing my luggage and filming a movie. The backpack was a little small for my stuff. But with the pain in my back and shoulders from hitting the belts, buckles, and waist pad, I couldn't take the weight any longer. Gregory's 45L sack has a much cheesier construction than the North Face sack (I don't think 35L is enough). I went on three solo overnight tented mountain trips this summer. But in cooler weather, you'll need more. To pack the tent more compactly in the compression bag, carry a sponge to wipe off any moisture from the tent's surface. Tents become even heavier with moisture after use. In the summer, it will be even heavier because your clothes will be wet with sweat and more clothing will be needed. Reducing the stress and pressure on the backpack was my main concern for this event.
